Every day I will write the very beginning of a story, a paragraph or a whole page, without worrying about where it might lead. "Nulla dies sine linea," I hope!
Showing posts with label Led Zeppelin. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Led Zeppelin. Show all posts
Wednesday, February 27, 2013
157
Dust clung to his clothes and in the lines on his face. The air conditioning in the diner had been running full blast to combat the dry heat outside, but the stranger didn't seem to sweat. As was usual, the diner's regulars turned to stare, not hiding their evaluation of the new man. Plus for nodding, minus for heading to the restroom before sitting. To Vera's mind, however, that was two plusses. When the man returned, he looked fifteen years younger and five pounds lighter with his face and hands washed. Vera poured him coffee, and he nodded his thanks, his eyes looking straight into hers. It was Vera who had to pull away, and she felt an odd rush. Normally, she might feel uncomfortable with that sort of attention, but not with this man. Vera didn't know if that was a good, or a bad thing.
Labels:
fiction,
In My Time of Dying,
Led Zeppelin,
romance,
Stephen King
Thursday, June 11, 2009
23
The waitress looked tired and sad because she was. It had been a long, hot morning that was working its way into a longer and hotter afternoon. The diner's big metal fans blew the heat and smell of fry grease around the dining room without cooling anything. A single TV played cable news in the corner and it was quietly reporting about death somewhere in the world.
There were still four customers from the morning. Gus and Bob and Pat would stay right on through lunch, sitting at the counter, reading their papers or watching the news, occasionally talking to one another. The waitress refilled their coffees: regular, regular with cream, and decaf. A tough-looking trucker lady had come in at 10:30, parking her rig along the side, and ordered a late breakfast: eggs, toast, bacon, and coffee, coffee, coffee. Extra sugar.
The waitress wore baggy khaki pants and a tank top under a thin, blue, button-up shirt. A newly smeared apron was tied around her waist. She wiped the side of her brow with the rolled-up sleeve on her upper arm as she cleaned the last table. The bell on the screen door jingled, but she didn't look up until she heard the three regulars' conversation stop and she didn't hear the sound of the newcomers taking a seat.
There were three men. Men looking for trouble. Men who had found it.
There were still four customers from the morning. Gus and Bob and Pat would stay right on through lunch, sitting at the counter, reading their papers or watching the news, occasionally talking to one another. The waitress refilled their coffees: regular, regular with cream, and decaf. A tough-looking trucker lady had come in at 10:30, parking her rig along the side, and ordered a late breakfast: eggs, toast, bacon, and coffee, coffee, coffee. Extra sugar.
The waitress wore baggy khaki pants and a tank top under a thin, blue, button-up shirt. A newly smeared apron was tied around her waist. She wiped the side of her brow with the rolled-up sleeve on her upper arm as she cleaned the last table. The bell on the screen door jingled, but she didn't look up until she heard the three regulars' conversation stop and she didn't hear the sound of the newcomers taking a seat.
There were three men. Men looking for trouble. Men who had found it.
Labels:
atmosphere,
emotion,
fiction,
In My Time of Dying,
karate,
Led Zeppelin,
violence
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